I didn’t think to check the prolewiki - thank you, that version I did not find so easily and already started on the older version. You are right to the modern ear the PDF version does flow better. I may end up reading both versions! Thanks again; much appreciated

Thank you very much for the insights and recommendations! I will keep it in mind when I hunt for a copy - starred your comment

I just want to add that your comment is excellent and got me changing my reading order so that Clausewitz’ On War is higher up on the list (if not next).